高考英语作文应用文写作求助信 书面表达分类指导8作文分类指导9

写求助信通常是因为自己或他人遇到了一些困难，需要得到对方的帮助或指点。因此，应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去时态。求助信一般应遵循以下几个步骤：

1．介绍自己。如果你所求助的人不是自己认识的熟人，而是某专家或报刊的栏目主编等，首先你得对自己做一个基本的介绍，以使他人对你有一个大概的了解。此时可用以下句式：

①My name is...I'm writing to you for some help. ②I'm writing a letter to you to get some help. 2．把你所面临的问题直接而坦诚地说出来，如： ①I have met much difficulty in... ②Do you have some good advice on... ③I would like to know how I can...

3．请求对方做某事时一定要语气委婉，态度谦恭。应用过去时代替现在时，用问句代替祈使句。如：

①Would you like to...so that...? ②I beg you to...so that... ③Could you spare some time to... ④Also, I would like you to...

4．谈一点自己对未来的展望、决心或打算，故可以接着写：

①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress./...and the result will be worth the effort. ②I know that no easy solution is at hand to the problem of...but...

③I may have a long way to go before I reach the final goal. But once I am on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.

最后，感激是不可不写的，并表达期待对方回复。 ①I would be grateful if you could/would... ②It will be appreciated if you can... ③I look forward to hearing from you.

④I'm looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance.

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司做兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。你

给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【审题导引】

1．本文请求对方为你审读你所写的申请信和简历是否符合基本要求。直接提出，不可拖泥带水。

2．要点必须完整，而且语气应诚恳有礼。句式和用词上应考虑变化和多样性，因为越是简单的内容，越是难以写出文采来，因而就越是难以得高分。

3．因是目前的问题，故时态多以现在时为主，包括现在进行时。 【参考范文】 Dear Ms Jenkins，

I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part–time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But it is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don't even know if there is something to pay attention to. Therefore, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you could give me some advice. I would be very grateful if you could help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I'd be really thankful.

Yours， Li Hua

【词句品鉴】

高级词汇 精彩短语和关联词 增分句型 【名师点评】 1．文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，作者使用现在时表达自己的问题和希望得到的帮助，符合求助信的时态特点。

2．句式和用词简洁，符合本文的要求。但一定的高级词汇和关联词的运用是保证高分的关键。因此，这方面应该有所加强。

3．本文语气上过于直接，可通过使用不同的句式来改善一下。如：I wonder if you could spare some time to read my personal resume and offer me some corrections. I am sure with your guidance I would expect a greater chance...。

practical; personal resume; application do sb a favor; take a part–time job; in order to; pay attention to it is the first time that I have...; I'm writing you the letter, hoping...; I will be very grateful if you...; Looking forward to...

(2018·长郡中学高三二检)假定你是李华。你想买一本适合中学生使用的英语词典，但拿不定主意该买哪一种。请你用英语给在北京学习中文的美国笔友Peter 写封信，征询他的意见。要点包括：

1．请他推荐一种；

2．如果可能，请他代购一本；

3．下周，哥哥李明要去北京，可以让他捎回。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 【参考范文】 Dear_Peter， How_are_you_doing? I'm writing to tell you that I want to buy an English dictionary suitable for senior high school students and I think you might be of great help. A few days ago, I went to my local bookstores and saw many different kinds on sale, but I couldn't make up my mind which one to buy. Will you please recommend one to me? Or, if it is convenient to you, would you like to buy one for me in Beijing?

My brother Li Ming will go to Beijing next week. If you don't mind, I will give him your telephone number and address so that he can take it back for me. Of course, he will give the money to you at the same time.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours， Li_Hua